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Monday 3 March 2014
The storm
The wind blew CRAZY FAST ! Suddenly out of sight a huge storm came and there was even a tornado.Then lightning struck out of sight. I was so scared. Trees fall down too.
Wow! Monica this is great, you've started your sentences in different ways and used different punctuation :) Well done! Be careful of your tense, in the last sentence it should be 'fell' down instead of 'fall'.
Wow! Monica this is great, you've started your sentences in different ways and used different punctuation :) Well done!
ReplyDeleteBe careful of your tense, in the last sentence it should be 'fell' down instead of 'fall'.
Great job!
Ria